My Story Draft One
Posted by derelictz on January 8, 2007
It’s been a while since I posted here. I don’t think that any of you people actually still visit it. Anyway, this may be a little late, due to “an act of God” (metaphorically speaking), but here is my final assignment draft one. Please read it and give me your feedback and comments. Help me improve by providing me with constructive critique please! Thanks!
Kane said
Im trying to guess what Ryan would say hehaha. Maybe less on the thoghts of the past of the character– all that thinking back about his past I think. Let the whole thing be in the moment and continuous.